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Black Rose Souls
Posts : 2 Points : 7 Reputation : 2 Join date : 2011-08-02 Age : 33 Location : New York
| Subject: Take this heart of mine Thu Aug 04, 2011 5:52 pm | |
| I’m dying… I’m dying. I’m dying! Am I dead?
I can feel it… It’s coming! There’s nothing left to be said.
The hurt, its unbearable! How it seethes, how it burns! My soul is being ripped to pieces, In pain it tosses and turns.
My body is weakening, Each new breath is a chore. My heart, it’s dying Of this I am sure.
It wants to die. It wants to waste away. It makes my body reject all nourishment It’s asking death to stay.
Death be merciful, Death be kind Death please, Take this heart of mine.
Death be nimble Death be sleek Take away the heart That makes me so weak.
Death, take it all Take it all away My soul needs rest In my bed I just want to lay.
Death, just take it Take this heart Pick up the pieces, It’s so torn apart.
Death, please help me, Take away the pain, Take away this organ, That has been so maimed.
Death, if I can’t have him I want no one at all Death, take my heart So in love I can never fall.
Death, my dear death My sweet death all alone I ask for one thing in return A resurrecting stone.
Hope, in other words Because I know One day my love Will stop being my foe.
And right then The stone will give it life My heart will be full of love, instead of strife.
All wounds healed All things new All because my love came back Was loyal and true.
One day I’ll be happy One day, he shall be kind But for now dear death, Take this painful heart of mine.
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Posts : 9 Points : 25 Reputation : 2 Join date : 2011-08-18
| Subject: :( Mon Feb 13, 2012 2:21 am | |
| are you OK? this is a beautiful piece of writing and i apsolutely love it but im worried for you |
| | | ~Lucy~ Souls
Posts : 22 Points : 56 Reputation : 1 Join date : 2011-04-11 Location : east of the sun, west of the moon
| Subject: Re: Take this heart of mine Mon Mar 05, 2012 6:11 pm | |
| So rich and dark, I love it But if you're feeling this way, don't be afraid to talk about it with anyone here. We're here to support each other |
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| Breeanna (Lacey) | Mon Apr 11, 2011 4:11 pm by Lacey | Hey ^.^
My name is Lacey, or some people call me by my real name, which some of you know by now. It doesn't matter what you call me, just not the ever so popular nickname "LayC" =_=
Anyways, nice to meet y'all. ^.^
PS: Yes, I haven't told people my real name. Only some of you know.
I have my reasons, so if you want to ask me why or what-not, just do it in a PM or msn. Doesn't matter to me
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Angie (IluvU) | Wed May 18, 2011 11:37 pm by IluvU | Hey everyone! I'm IluvU but you can call me Angie or Luv, whatever. I'm a graphic designer currently working (my job is so frigging cool!) but my true desire is to become a Fashion Designer.
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Check in Book | Tue Apr 12, 2011 12:17 pm by Mocat | The please may the new topic tittle be your name (if you are using it) and your username
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Dylan (ThePoet) | Thu Aug 18, 2011 5:05 am by ThePoet | my name is Dylan, im new to the forums but im glad i found a site like this, it made me happy
im a 17 yo m from canada, i like to read, watch anime and cartoons, i dont work out that much but i love rollerblading and going for bike rides, and i hope we all get to know eachother better
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Edens Fury | Wed Apr 13, 2011 8:05 am by Edens Fury | K So, Was asked to join by Moni, sooo Here I am. When I feel Like it, i'll change the tittle and add my name but for now you can just call me Eden. I'm in and out of the computer world lately, but I am willing to talk or just be a listening ear to anyone. So yep, that's about it
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Jessica (Angel Love) | Mon Apr 11, 2011 10:39 pm by Angel Love | Hi! Let me start by saying my name is not really Angel its Jessica. As you already know, I got two dogs but one of them is mine. His name is Joey. I am not really your average girl. I play sports, video games, read and watch anime. I love music with a passion. I am always listening to music. I search up quotes every now and then that fit my mood. I give advice to those who asks me to help them. I …
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Monica (Mocat) | Tue Apr 12, 2011 12:33 pm by Mocat | Hey everybody!
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OnCallWingman | Tue Apr 12, 2011 7:57 pm by OnCallWingman | To clarify, I'm female. ;P I don't like using my real name around people I don't know who I can't see, so y'all can call me Wingman. I'm in the military so I can't really give you a specific place that I live coz...y'know...I'll be gone from here in a year and a half and I'm only spending 3-4 months at my next station. But I'm here to give and receive advice, was brought here by Mocat, …
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Red(howmayihelpyou) | Sat May 21, 2011 1:12 am by howmayihelpyou | So, i should have done this awhile ago but i have been really busy...
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